Sunday 18 August 2024

All the Good Girls by Willow Rose

All the Good Girls is a thriller and the first in the Harry Hunter series.

 

Lucy just wanted to stay out at the beach party a little later than usual. Then her dad gets a call that she has been sexually assaulted and now Lucy is missing. Four girls from Lucy’s class have been murdered on a boat they took out to have a good time on and another girl’s body has been found in a dumpster.

 

Harry Hunter is a homicide detective who is tasked with babysitting William, the next potential victim, but also the one accused of raping Lucy and found not guilty. Harry is given a lot of leeway due to his wife, Camille, being in a coma from a drug overdose but pushes this leeway as far as he can. William seems to have a hold on many people in the community and Harry knows there is a deeper story there.

 

When Harry takes his eye off the ball to check on something while meant to be babysitting, another person dies. Now in trouble with the boss even more, Harry needs to redeem himself. But the killer could be coming after Harry or his family next...

 

This is a really quick read and starts off well but falls in the middle and continues downhill to the end. First off, Harry gives out Jack Reacher vibes. Big guy, soft spot for the underdog, prepared to go vigilante, and knows people off the grid who are experts in certain things. So it was hard to see him as a character in his own right. I did appreciate his back story with Camille and his sister as well as his love for his daughter, Josie.

 

What I struggled with were implausible scenarios like the control William had over others and the ability someone had to kidnap an ICU nurse in the manner they did. Plus the ending is pieced together by clues the reader is not privy to, so when the killer is revealed it is confusing.

 

The writer tends to use long-winded sentences that sometimes detract and can be confusing by the time you get to the end of the sentence. It was an average read for me and one that does not make me want to continue the series.

 

Many thanks to NetGalley for the opportunity to review the book.



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