Friday 18 October 2019

Crueler and more Unusual by Erik Dean



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Macaria by R Kitt


Macaria is the first in a series and combines a bit of Greek mythology, science fiction, romance and the supernatural. It has a lead into the second book and the author emphasises the Six Degrees of Separation ideology.

Adam arrives at the gates to the Underworld. Oops. He very possibly should not be there. Well, Macaria, daughter of Hades, certainly seems to think so. She decides to free his soul and her father is so angry with her that he sends her topside. Back up to Earth. Macaria now gets the opportunity to meet her mom for the first time too. And then a revelation. Apparently, they are not who they appear to be. Now what?

As the book started I was intrigued as to why Adam was at the gates to the Underworld and why Macaria sent him back. The descriptions at the beginning of the book were illuminating, but the writing did not seem to carry on in the same manner. I found the fall-in-love-instantly relationship between the two very strange and even knowing the backstory didn’t answer the myriad of questions that then popped up.

Unfortunately, another round of proofreading was definitely needed too as silly mistakes cropped up with incorrectly used words being substituted for another like using scotch free instead of scot-free or affect and effect. The story is short and the abrupt ending (even though there was a teaser for the second book) did not do enough to draw me in and want to continue with the series. This is a pity considering that the premise of six degrees of separation between the books sounded promising. Maybe if the story and characters had been fleshed out a little more I would have wanted to see where this went.

Thanks to Voracious Readers Only and the author for a copy of the book.