Sunday 8 January 2023

Forget Me Not by Kristen Middleton

Forget Me Not is a crime thriller and the first in a series.

 

Amanda’s ex-husband has died and left her everything. Considering they hadn’t seen each other in years, this is a strange occurrence, but Amanda takes her son, Kevin, and off they head to Summit Lake where the house Brad has left her still stands. Summit Lake is where Amanda grew up and her mom and stepfather live there, so it’ll be a good getaway for her, Kevin, and their dog, Lacey.

 

Not too long after arriving, Amanda starts receiving threatening letters and gifts meant to create fear. With no other leads, the police are unable to help. When the threats turn physical, Amanda knows she needs to figure out what’s going on by herself or she could end up dead. And when a startling revelation about her ex surfaces, more questions open up. But without answers for them…

 

The book started with a hook, and as it moved on, I thought this was a great idea. It could have been the whole way through too if it wasn’t for some things in the story that didn’t gel. There seemed to be a lot of info that the author wanted the reader to know (which you would expect would add to the story/character and move it forward) but that turned out to be info not needed. Like a lot of backstory that didn’t assist with the outcome or in specific circumstances.

 

Some of the physical feats were pretty impressive, even if pretty improbable, and as soon as an animal is hurt in a story, that gets my back up. I didn’t understand the need to get the garage sale going so quickly, how a recovering alcoholic was given a wine cooler to drink, why Amanda would dive into situations where it was obvious what was going to happen, and that one can just contact Russian gangsters that are to be found on Google.

 

*spoiler alert ahead and attacker mentioned*

And what I found very strange was why the killer waited so long to exact the revenge. For someone who was able to show up at the precise moment needed for so many attacks and get into so many places without being seen (after having stalked Amanda), he seemed remarkably clueless on what had happened before especially with Kevin’s dad. Plus considering the fact that he had a wife just about to give birth and she was with him all the time, how was he able to leave the house to attack Amanda at the times he did? There were far too many coincidences and he was such a small character in the story to suddenly be the killer.

 

I’m really disappointed as I felt sure this was going to be a great read, but I was let down by the story as well as errors in the book and quantification of speech (he said/she said is not necessary every single time). The ending also felt very rushed and I closed the book with no real feeling of resolution.



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