The Canine Collection is a bundle of short horror stories with a supernatural element and all involving a dog or two It runs the gamut of alcohol and domestic abuse leading to violence and a lifechanging discovery, to wishes (even when for good) having consequences, to vampires making choices, to shapeshifters protecting those they love.
The author’s writing style is very easy to
read and she has a lovely flow where you are involved in the story and then she
throws a twist that makes you pause and possibly reread a line. But in a good
way. What did trip up the story were the punctuation errors like missing
quotation marks or lowercase words meant to be capped or full stops that should
have been commas. Even phrases like vice versa were mixed up and made visa
versa. These things make me pause in a bad way! Not to mention that the
chapters in the first story were all out of whack and had me confused. I wish
each story had started with a title too as it went directly from the last
chapter of the previous story to chapter one of the next and you weren’t sure
if it was a numbering error. It seems the edition sent for the Reedsy review was not the
one uploaded for publishing.
Immortal Me
has a great parallel storyline to it in the question of whether a domestic
abuser will ever change his spots. In Jinn or Jinx? I wish the dog had
had a bigger role but I loved Eric’s wishes and the way he saw the world. In My
Sister’s Keeper there is almost a punishment Emma gets for the choice she
makes, but the underlying reason of sacrifice is very sad. I didn’t agree with
the synopsis for the story as the “turning” was not really the concern. In The
Shape of the Shift the canine is not what you expect and there was a
question in there I would have loved an answer to.
The collection is good and the ideas work
well as short stories as they are punchy and able to offer a packed plot. With
extra editing, this would be a great afternoon read.
Thanks to Reedsy Discovery and the author for the opportunity to review the book.
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